Andariel ([info]andariell) wrote,
@ 2003-08-03 21:19:00
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Ficlet #2 for the LJ Faeries

Via a suggestion by [info]happyminion and inspiration on the pairing through the writing of [info]tstar78 and [info]thamiris, I give you my first foray into Pete/Lana. Hope the faeries like it! If not, you need to comment and tell me what you want to see *g*. Log out temporarily if you want to remain anonymous. It's all good *hugs the Faeries*


More Than Paper

As Pete pulled his Mazda into the garage, he patted the breast pocket of his suit jacket. He had a moment of panic, thinking that he'd left the envelope on his desk, but the reassuring crinkle of paper met his ears. He turned off the ignition and slid out of the driver's seat with his briefcase in hand. A quick foray into the backseat to retrieve the bouquet of gardenias and irises, and he walked into the house.

Pete inhaled deeply, taking in the scent of lasagna and garlic bread. He strolled into the kitchen with a smile, expecting to see Lana there, but the room was vacant. He retrieved a vase for the flowers from a cabinet and ran water in it. When he'd placed the arrangement on the table and there was still no sign of his wife, he called out, "Lana, I'm home!"

Her voice echoed down the stairs to him. "I'll be down in a minute!"

Pete loosened his tie and leaned against the breakfast bar. Retrieving the envelope from his pocket, he slapped it against his palm. Paper signified a first wedding anniversary, and it had taken Pete a while to come up with something fitting. He grinned at the idea of Lana's reaction to the gift -- a week rental of a cabin in the Poconos. Just the two of them with no fax machines, no cell phones, and no demands from Lex regarding the campaign. That was the real gift, truth be told, and it had been far harder to arrange the time off than to find the perfect getaway spot.

"Penny for your thoughts."

Pete looked up, the welcoming smile dropping into a look of awe as he took in the sight of his wife in the doorway. Her hair was piled loosely on top of her head with tendrils hanging down to frame her face. The shimmering peach sheath dress enhanced the honey gold of her skin, and Pete wondered for the thousand and first time how he'd ever been so lucky that she'd fallen in love with him. "Thoughts? I'm not sure that I'm capable of them right now." He crossed over to her, sliding his hands possessively around the curves of her hips. "You look gorgeous."

Lana flushed with pleasure, raising her hands to his shoulders. "Flatterer." She met his lips with gentle, sure pressure, and as the kiss deepened, her fingers kneaded his shoulders. Pete sank into her, reveling in the comfort and soul deep connection he always felt in Lana's arms. They say friends make the best lovers, and the two of them were living proof of that.

The timer on the stove buzzed insistently, and they reluctantly pulled away from each other. With an efficiency born of familiarity, they had the table set and food dished up in a matter of minutes. During the meal, Pete relayed the latest machinations of Lex's opponent in the Senatorial campaign, and Lana provided insight from a press agent perspective that Pete believed would be invaluable to their response. Lana still refused to work officially on Lex's campaign, though Pete and Lex both had tried to convince her to change her mind. The response was always the same -- "Call me when he's running for President and I'll be there."

Pete didn't know if she said that because she believed it wouldn't come to that, or because she knew it would.

While they sipped iced tea after dinner, Pete handed over the envelope. "Happy anniversary, baby."

It took quite a lot of convincing to make Lana accept that Lex really would leave them alone for a whole week. Once she believed it, she threw herself into Pete's arms. Sitting on his lap in the kitchen chair, she kissed him and gave little squeaks of pleasure that made all the wrangling with Lex to accomplish the trip completely worthwhile.

After the mini celebration which left Pete anxious to get up to the bedroom, Lana stood up and retrieved a wrapped package. She returned to her previous position on his lap and handed him the present. Pete could feel her quivering and wondered what could make her anxious so suddenly. "Come on! Open it!"

Lana bit into her lip, and Pete decided that the questions could wait. He ripped off the paper and looked down at the book in his hands. He couldn't tell if Lana was still shaking or if the motion was now coming from him. "The Big Book of Baby Names."

"Yeah. I figured we could go through it tonight."

Pete set the book on the table and cupped Lana's face in his hands. "Lana? You're...?"

She nodded with jerky motions, tears making her eyes shine in the light. "I'm pregnant, Pete." Lana gave a choked little laugh, one tear escaping to roll down her cheek. "We're having a baby."

"Oh, God..." Pete couldn't think of anything else to say -- no words could express the joy he was feeling. He kissed Lana fervently, and he definitely knew then that his hands were shaking. The words flooded back in a rush, and he pulled back. "When?"

Lana smiled, glistening all over with happiness. "September." She placed his hand on her still flat belly and held it there. "So... you think we're ready for this?"

Pete glanced from his hand back up to Lana's face. "More than ready." He kissed her softly this time, the reverence and awe he felt flowing through him. "I love you, Lana."

"I love you too, Pete. Happy anniversary."

--- end ---

End Note: I hope that wasn't too sappy. I'm still getting a feel for Pete/Lana, and I've never written Pete POV before *worries*.




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[info]semisuper
2003-08-03 06:32 pm UTC (link)
*loves*

Awww, Andy!! I got all teary. I loved this. I really did. It was so sweet, and exactly how a first anniversary ought to be. You did a really lovely job here -- one of the things you're so wonderfully good at is setting up the scene, making me feel like I'm right there, observing, and this fic is a perfect example of that.

The parts about Lex leaving them alone make me giggle, too. *g*

I'd love to see more Pete/Lana from you, my dear. I really would. I have a feeling you could make me buy just about anything you write.

(As an aside, I think the thing that makes me so unsure about Pete/Lana fic in general is that I just don't feel the chemistry between them *on the show*. *You* made it feel natural, and sweet, and I liked it. If I could recast one or the other of them, I think I might be much more likely to buy their future together. This is one instance where I really wonder what the show will actually do -- if they'll explore this angle, and get the two of them together. I'm really curious about it.)

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[info]andariell
2003-08-03 08:02 pm UTC (link)
*smooches Sarah*

Thank you so much, babe! I was really anxious about this story, since I've never written the pairing before. The support is very much appreciated, my OTP darling *g*.

And on your side note, I agree about the chemistry to some extent, but I think part of that is the writing. Pete and Lana don't really interact much on a level that allows chemistry to be demonstrated (I don't recall them ever having a scene alone, now that I think about it). I'd like to see TPTB explore that, even just a hint of it, as a nod to canon.

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[info]semisuper
2003-08-03 08:23 pm UTC (link)
...but I think part of that is the writing. Pete and Lana don't really interact much on a level that allows chemistry to be demonstrated (I don't recall them ever having a scene alone, now that I think about it). I'd like to see TPTB explore that, even just a hint of it, as a nod to canon.

I think you're absolutely right on this. *mwah*

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[info]digitalwave
2003-08-03 06:36 pm UTC (link)
Andy,

I really liked it, it felt very real and their voices were right on. It was a wonderful slice of life story showing two people very much in love with each other. When Pete found out about the baby it was definitely a nice 'Awwwww' moment.

It's always a treat getting to see Lana as something more than a clingy dormouse and it's nice for Pete to have more to do too.

I love the 'Babysitter Universe' and this fits right in. :)

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[info]andariell
2003-08-03 08:06 pm UTC (link)
Hey babe! *hugs*

Thanks so much for commenting -- I really appreciate it.

It's always a treat getting to see Lana as something more than a clingy dormouse and it's nice for Pete to have more to do too.

Yes! I think what Lana needs is something Clark could never give her, but Pete definitely could. Makes them appealing to me as a potential pairing.

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[info]barely_bean
2003-08-03 06:53 pm UTC (link)
She nodded with jerky motions, tears making her eyes shine in the light. "I'm pregnant, Pete." Lana gave a choked little laugh, one tear escaping to roll down her cheek. "We're having a baby."

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEee! Dude Andy, this is so fucking adorable! *hugs* This pairing has me squeeing lately, and just the perfect amount of sap!

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[info]andariell
2003-08-03 08:07 pm UTC (link)
*loves all over Caro*

Thank you, sweetie! Getting the thumbs up from you totally makes my night *smooches*.

I'll get you away from Bex. Oh yes, I will *eg*

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[info]happyminion
2003-08-03 06:55 pm UTC (link)
Awwwww! See, this is what Lana wants. This is what Pete is good at. Stand up guy meets stay at home girl and they make pretty babies together and get Lex in the white house!

I have to say, you painted a *very* pretty picture of Lana, in that peach sheath dress with the hair and all. And a baby! *squee* They would have such PRETTY babies!

Thank you for writing this. Remember, the wild and chaotic life belongs to Superman and Lex Luthor. Don't apologize for writing a realistic newlywed couple. *hearts* Love this! Thanks for writing it!!

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[info]andariell
2003-08-03 08:10 pm UTC (link)
Oh man... I am so glad you liked this. Yay!!!

Remember, the wild and chaotic life belongs to Superman and Lex Luthor. Don't apologize for writing a realistic newlywed couple. *hearts* Love this!

*smooches you* As always, the reality check is appreciated. Almost as much as your support. Not nearly as much as you yourself, babe. *hugs*

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[info]thamiris
2003-08-05 10:49 pm UTC (link)
This was so warm and adorable, Andy. You mentioned being worried about Pete's voice but he sounded perfectly natural to me, just the way he does on the show, and both his words and his actions rang true for me.

It was so clear that Pete adored Lana, and that she adored him, and I went misty at the end--and you have to understand that I'm not the type to go misty in these circumstances. But with Lana as right as Pete, how could I resist? One of my favorite bits in the story, in fact, is when Pete lets us know that Lana's waiting (or not) for Lex to run for President; that was an especially wonderful bit of character detail. So, while it could be just a simple fairy tale, perfect happiness between two people, you've added some realism to it.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

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[info]andariell
2003-08-06 07:04 pm UTC (link)
*snuggles Tham*

Thank you so much for reading, babe! I'm thrilled that Pete sounds natural to you. And how giddy am I that you believed the chemistry between them, and that the characterization rings true? Dude... someone needs to peel me off the ceiling. *loves all over you*

And thanks so much for the e-card! That was an incredibly sweet gesture *hugs*

*ponders* How can you possibly be one of those puss-covered, nasty byotch SV fen? This is not possible, so someone must have hacked your journal to post this wonderful, supportive comment *nods firmly*.

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[info]lexcorp_hope
2003-08-24 01:13 pm UTC (link)
You wrote Pete/Lana! Why didn't anybody tell me you wrote Pete/Lana, I love Pete/Lana?! (And now I will stop saying Pete/Lana. It's starting to sound like brand name fertilizer or something.) This is so warm and sweet, and their voices are wonderful. I love the details, and you really capture the warmth and affection between them beautifully. Thank you so much for sharing, it was j ust lovely!! (And hey! Did you post this to Wild Coyote? *quirks brows*)

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[info]andariell
2003-08-24 02:41 pm UTC (link)
*giggles* Brand name fertilizer? You crack me up, boo. Heeee! Yeah, Wendi threw the pairing at me and I just blinked. Like, "wow... new pairing!" I got all excited by it.

I'm thrilled that Pete and Lana sound right to you. As the mood icon says, I was a nervous girl. I thought it was way too schmoopy (diabetics beware! *g*) -- the comments really help lessen my anxiety *hugs you*.

As for posting to WC, I've been terrible about archiving recently. I have several that need submitted, but I haven't taken the time for it. I haven't even updated my site with the recent stuff *facepalms*. I also have a Chloe/Lex from the Screw!Clark challenge that I should send to WC. Maybe this week I can get my butt in gear LOL.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, babe -- Mwah!

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